Small grey letters; too much text on a narrow board. Accept two relevant details.
She enlarged the heading and moved the opening time to the first line.
The contrast shows that correct information can fail if people do not notice or read it.
Two comments are too little evidence to represent all visitors.
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We waited inside because it was raining.
The signs were checked by the pupils.
Example only; accept another relevant, accurate response. Our library needs clearer signs. Several visitors asked where to return their books, even though a notice was beside the desk. A larger heading and a simple arrow could make the information easier to find. Some people may worry that extra signs will clutter the room. We could test one sign for a week and record how many visitors still need directions before deciding whether to keep it.
Accept a correct example from the learner’s own writing and a sensible vocabulary improvement.